With some changes...
this could be a NG hit. really!!!
The melody from the very beginning is very very catchy. What changes would I make to this?
I would make the beginning slowler. I think that if you put down the bpm from 00:00 to 0:26 (only a little bit) the result would be an impressing beginning of the song. Then you could use a powerfull gunmashine effect and keep the same melody, with more speed and a new bass.
That's another thing very important. The bass of the track. The bass of a track gives an overall impression of the song because it almost shows what style of music are you hearing. I think that the bass that you used here is very impersonal. If you change it and use another bass with a trance touch, or a house or electro touch, the song would gain much.
And there's no much to say. Only some changes in the EQ, a break in the middle of the song using only the piano melody very slow, and nothing more.
Good work. I'm waiting to hear your final version of this
Keep it up Nicolas!!!
:)